I only want the ones I can't get

Idolm@ster アイドルマスター Translation

So, I read through the script I made of Rockin' Girl Volume 1, and thought I could do a little better in some places, especially in the last chapter.

Translation (text only): http://www.mediafire.com/?waymt8l4p2tb3wk
Online Gangan: http://www.ganganonline.com/comic/idolmaster/

I think I'm more comfortable with this version. The changes are mostly minor, there's nothing like an overhaul or anything like that. Though they are sporadic and all over the place.